Mia's junior year

chapter 3- this means war (p3)

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“No! Why was Hannah Ferrell here?” Mia demanded, as Kate could smell the rum on Mia’s breath. She’d clearly been drinking a lot, which meant she’d drunk a lot of pop too. Unfortunately, Kate couldn’t spot even a tiny bit of bloating across Mia’s tight waistline.

“I didn’t invite her.” Kate protested, as she tried to play it cool and line up a throw for her pong game. To Kate’s surprise, Mia was quick to pull her hand down in a demanding fashion.

“Then we need a freaking bouncer next time.” Mia fumed, as Kate could tell Mia was pissed. She needed to calm her down or she’d make a scene for sure.

“What’s wrong with Hannah? She always seems nice.” Kate muttered trying to ease the tension.

“She’s nice, to boys, because she’s desperate for anyone and everyone to f*ck her. The slut has zero standards. She’s not pretty, she’s not smart and she’s not nice, but more importantly she’s a lying bitch who likes to spread false rumors about me because she’s jealous.” Mia growled. Kate could see that plenty of people were eavesdropping, but Mia either didn’t notice or didn’t care.

“Calm down Mia. Next time I’ll be sure to keep the invite list smaller and we can have someone be a bouncer.” Kate assured Mia. Mia was satisfied with Kate’s response but there was still some further business to be had. Kate’s eye-catching getup certainly drew attention to her bust and shapely hips, but it didn’t hide the protruding bit of soft flesh that appeared freshly bloated around the lower portion of Kate’s abdomen. It was the perfect target.

“I’m calm.” Mia muttered, as she looked around. Everyone’s attention at the table was on her. Perfect. “Can I play?”

“We are in the middle of a game?” Kate explained, as Mia grabbed the pong ball from Kate’s hand and slowly poked Kate’s soft midsection with her other one. Kate’s eyes widened with a mix of surprise and fear, as she felt Mia’s touch.

“Don’t you have to go to the bathroom? You’re looking hella bloated.” Mia evilly teased with a smug expression on her face, as Kate’s cheeks blushed a fierce red color. Everybody’s eyes immediately followed Mia’s finger. Kate even gulped as she looked downward and regretted what she saw. She was sporting a little round food baby from all the beer, but what made it worse was that it didn’t look firmly packed underneath a muscled stomach, it served to extenuate the soft bit of chub Kate had been unable to vanquish from her body over the summer. It looked like fat. And Mia knew that. That’s why she’d drawn everybody’s attention to it. Kate was lucky Mia gave her an out for this humiliating situation, this time.

“Yeah, you can play till I get back.” Kate reluctantly gave in as she accepted Mia’s will. The last thing Kate wanted was to subject herself to any more humiliation.

“Oh, and I can’t find the key for the upstairs bathroom, so you’ll have to use the downstairs one like everyone else.” Mia smugly responded, as Kate heard Mia’s message loud and clear. Mia had effectively banished her from her own pong game. There was no use fighting her on it. There was nothing she could do. Yet. But in time, Kate swore to make Mia pay for this.

“Okay, I guess I’ll go wait in line. Good luck.” Kate replied, as she bit her tongue. There was nothing she could say to get back at Mia.

“Thanks Kate!” Mia cheered, as she happily lined up her first shot.

“Yeah.. you’re welcome.” Kate droned, as she walked back to the bar and grabbed herself a beer. Mia always had to be the center of attention. It was so annoying. Kate knew she needed to calm down, so she went into the kitchen to spectate how that pong game was going. Sitting against the countertop alone, she was a bit disappointed that Mia looked just as perfect as ever. After a whole week of trying to sabotage her, she had nothing to show for it. Kate took a pretty big swig of beer to ease her thoughts. Her plan wasn’t going to pay off in a week, she was in this for the long haul. Kate closed her eyes and imagined the day when Mia’s reign of terror came crashing down. It was such a pleasant daydream Kate didn’t even notice the guy causally walking over to sit next to her.
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Comments

BS Writer 4 years
I loved this story and hopes it continues. I feel like the end really set up volume two to be an amazing story where Mia finally gets her comeuppance and the humiliation she deserves.
Lucid Ego 4 years
Commenting on this site is really annoying^^
Thank you so far!
Lucid Ego 4 years
Hearing that you have planned 5 Volumes for this story got me excited though i can understand that you want the recognition for the work you put into
Lucid Ego 4 years
Made this ACC to tell you that i enjoyed this story very much so far. The characters seem refreshing to me and i like the pace of it. My favorite parts have been the encounter between Kate and Jay and the twisted game between Kate and Mia. Hearing that y
Valerio 4 years
I reccomand this story to all, for the plot,events that are not trivial, the costant uploading and your greet writing, I really like kate and when she looks embarassed I hope you continue with the story. (Sorry for my english)
Valerio 4 years
This is my favorite stories on the website, I really like because have a "slow gain" and the characters feel alive, and thats something that didn't see to much infact many story have characters that are only for the fetish but don't have a personality.
Sexypeggy 4 years
Hello . I really love your story that I literally devour.
iam surprised that you had planned 5 chapter.
it's a good surprise for me. Me like too, kate.
because she want the revenge the mia .
is nice body .
My like part or Mia burp .
imag
ClearSkyNZ 4 years
But honestly I think your one of the best writers when it comes to writing in this genre of this fetish. It's hard to find stories where you care about the characters and their motivations as well as having the fetish present. Keep up the great work!
ClearSkyNZ 4 years
I love the detail you add to the story, but I think the reason some people don't make it to the end is because of how detailed you develop these characters and the lack of sexual scenes with their weight gain
ClearSkyNZ 4 years
I think the way you set up these characters and their goals was done really well. I loved the intimate moments Kate would have with Jay. It was a nice change of pace from the pure hate she would feel for Mia
Tttfeeder 4 years
Lost some weight over the summer and gets her revenge in their senior year! At the end of the day it’s your story though, keep up the great work!
Tttfeeder 4 years
My favourite story of yours yet I checked for new chapters daily. My idea for the rest of it is to have Mia gain the weight but somehow win the bet and lose the weight. It would be interesting if she humiliated Kate for the rest of the year, but then Kate
Polarisdreamer 4 years
AlexandrKerensky thank you that's very kind! the plot of Volume 2 is already basically set in stone, so feel free to let me know your thoughts! You're english is great!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@BlissfullyAware thank you! That's very useful feedback! Thanks for the support!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
gfgadgfhd, Chubbybelly1029, thank you

Davidewol You are probably right. Thanks!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@non-suspcious I don't mind the comment spam, but if you feel it would be easier, feel free to message, I really appreciate your feedback!
Vladimir B 4 years
...want to disturb the organic environment that has developed in your story. Sorry for my English)
Vladimir B 4 years
I liked the story, thank you very much, almost every day I read with binge. Quite a long time (and maybe never) I have not met so elaborate, large and interesting stories. I would express my opinion about events and characters, but I do not want to dist
Non-suspicious 4 years
... is very memorable to me. (i keep overestimating the character limit on these comments lol... prolly should've just messaged u but oh well)

do u mind the comment spam or should i message u the rest lol
Non-suspicious 4 years
very hard for me to pick a favorite character-- part of why i love ur writing is that u take the time to give even the side characters distinct personalities.

same for the second point-- u write everything very well. the overall plot and writing style
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