Mia's junior year

chapter 3- this means war (p4)

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“You okay?” A cool voice uttered, as Kate opened her eyes and turned to the side. She immediately recognized the boy sitting next to her.

“Hey Trent! I’m okayyy, umm.. Wha-when did you get here?” Kate jittered, as she tried to compose herself and look relaxed. Not only was Trent the best player on the school’s basketball team, he was probably the hottest guy in the school. He had short spiky blonde hair, rippling muscles, and even a six-pack visible from beneath the tight polo shirt he was wearing. He was so dreamy. However, he was also unobtainable. Too good to be true. Trent was one of those guys who’d entered college with a longtime high school girlfriend, Julie. While, plenty of girls pined after him freshman and sophomore year, Trent always stayed faithful to his long distance, high school sweetheart. Of course a perfect guy had a perfect girlfriend, it was so typical.

“Heard the commotion when the team was walking to the bar over on.. yeah, on Market Street. They weren’t interested in stopping in, but I thought I’d check it out. Just for kicks.” Trent admitted, as he sent a smile Kate’s way and watched her blush in response.

“You like the house? Cute, right?” Kate grinned. She couldn’t keep herself composed in the face of such a perfect guy.

“Very cute. But not as cute as the owners.” Trent commented, as he eyed Kate up and down for her to see.

“Haha, stop it. I look like sh*t.” Kate nervously laughed, as she scratched the back of her head and nervously played with her long blonde hair.

“No, I passed some sobbing b*tch with a beer gut on my way over here. She looked like sh*t.” Trent announced, as he leaned closer to Kate and whispered in her ear, “You look outta this world.”

“Hahaaha, I’m flattered you think I’m more attractive than a b*tch with a beer gut.” Kate shivered from the feel of Trent’s breath. This was different.. Trent was acting different.. Kate liked it, but she wondered what was going on.

“I wasn’t trying to say you guys looked.. comparable. Beer guts on women are just.. they’re just fucked up.” Trent slowly elaborated, as Kate nodded.

“Of course.” Kate agreed, as she took care to suck in her stomach as much as she could. If Trent hadn’t noticed she was bloated yet, she couldn’t let him notice now. She had to play it cool, so she agreed, “Nobody wants to date someone who looks like their diet consists of cheap beer, cheap wine, and gas station junk food.”

“Exactly! A girl can have awesome tits, a tolerable face, look pretty solid from the waist down, but a beer gut just f*cks it all up. It’s like.. like what the f*ck? Don’t you even care about yourself?” Trent concluded, as Kate nodded in agreement. Trent was definitely drunk. She could smell the beer on his breath.

“Yeah totally.” Kate smiled, as she tilted her head and leaned a bit closer to Trent to ask her next question, “So, how was your summer?”

“Not great.” Trent shook his head. He looked upset. Kate was getting butterflies in the pit of her stomach. “Julie and I broke up.”

“Oh-my-god! I’m so sorry!” Kate exclaimed. She couldn’t believe her ears. This was awesome! Trent was single!! Trent Colwell, was single! He was single, and he was talking to her! Fighting back the urge to scream with excitement, Kate remained cool and turned into a consummate consoling listener.

She spent the next twenty minutes comforting him, talking with him, and staring at his perfect jawline. Of course, eventually the party died down and Trent gave her a studly goodbye, but Kate felt confident she’d somehow developed a new kind of bond with Trent that she’d never had before. He was pretty choked up about is ex, if she played her cards right, Trent could fall right into her lap. Kate went to sleep dreaming of such a reality. What a world that would be..

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Comments

BS Writer 4 years
I loved this story and hopes it continues. I feel like the end really set up volume two to be an amazing story where Mia finally gets her comeuppance and the humiliation she deserves.
Lucid Ego 4 years
Commenting on this site is really annoying^^
Thank you so far!
Lucid Ego 4 years
Hearing that you have planned 5 Volumes for this story got me excited though i can understand that you want the recognition for the work you put into
Lucid Ego 4 years
Made this ACC to tell you that i enjoyed this story very much so far. The characters seem refreshing to me and i like the pace of it. My favorite parts have been the encounter between Kate and Jay and the twisted game between Kate and Mia. Hearing that y
Valerio 4 years
I reccomand this story to all, for the plot,events that are not trivial, the costant uploading and your greet writing, I really like kate and when she looks embarassed I hope you continue with the story. (Sorry for my english)
Valerio 4 years
This is my favorite stories on the website, I really like because have a "slow gain" and the characters feel alive, and thats something that didn't see to much infact many story have characters that are only for the fetish but don't have a personality.
Sexypeggy 4 years
Hello . I really love your story that I literally devour.
iam surprised that you had planned 5 chapter.
it's a good surprise for me. Me like too, kate.
because she want the revenge the mia .
is nice body .
My like part or Mia burp .
imag
ClearSkyNZ 4 years
But honestly I think your one of the best writers when it comes to writing in this genre of this fetish. It's hard to find stories where you care about the characters and their motivations as well as having the fetish present. Keep up the great work!
ClearSkyNZ 4 years
I love the detail you add to the story, but I think the reason some people don't make it to the end is because of how detailed you develop these characters and the lack of sexual scenes with their weight gain
ClearSkyNZ 4 years
I think the way you set up these characters and their goals was done really well. I loved the intimate moments Kate would have with Jay. It was a nice change of pace from the pure hate she would feel for Mia
Tttfeeder 4 years
Lost some weight over the summer and gets her revenge in their senior year! At the end of the day it’s your story though, keep up the great work!
Tttfeeder 4 years
My favourite story of yours yet I checked for new chapters daily. My idea for the rest of it is to have Mia gain the weight but somehow win the bet and lose the weight. It would be interesting if she humiliated Kate for the rest of the year, but then Kate
Polarisdreamer 4 years
AlexandrKerensky thank you that's very kind! the plot of Volume 2 is already basically set in stone, so feel free to let me know your thoughts! You're english is great!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@BlissfullyAware thank you! That's very useful feedback! Thanks for the support!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
gfgadgfhd, Chubbybelly1029, thank you

Davidewol You are probably right. Thanks!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@non-suspcious I don't mind the comment spam, but if you feel it would be easier, feel free to message, I really appreciate your feedback!
Vladimir B 4 years
...want to disturb the organic environment that has developed in your story. Sorry for my English)
Vladimir B 4 years
I liked the story, thank you very much, almost every day I read with binge. Quite a long time (and maybe never) I have not met so elaborate, large and interesting stories. I would express my opinion about events and characters, but I do not want to dist
Non-suspicious 4 years
... is very memorable to me. (i keep overestimating the character limit on these comments lol... prolly should've just messaged u but oh well)

do u mind the comment spam or should i message u the rest lol
Non-suspicious 4 years
very hard for me to pick a favorite character-- part of why i love ur writing is that u take the time to give even the side characters distinct personalities.

same for the second point-- u write everything very well. the overall plot and writing style
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