Mia's junior year

chapter 21- beneath the beauty (p3)

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Mia’s ego couldn’t take the smug way Kate was looking at her. It was like she was so self-assured. So positive of her accusations. It was like she was silently laughing at her!

And what for?? What did Kate have to laugh about??! She was a loser! She was fat! She’d just lost all rights of having guests over to the house! She’d lost everything! She’d always lose!

And yet the big breasted bimbo with the unsightly spare tire, and the overly abundant buttocks, still acted like she didn’t know her rightful place in relation to Mia. She wasn’t her equal. Not even close! She didn’t even deserve the benefit of having her friendship! Mia was sorority royalty! Kate wasn’t even fit to be her peasant! If anything, Kate’s proper place in relation to Mia was likely somewhere between shining her shoes as a submissive servant or cleaning up after her like hired help. Boy would Mia teach Kate some proper respect if she was her personal obedient servant.

Maybe that was exactly what was necessary to put her troublesome housemate in line. Kate liked making bets. Maybe this would be the last bet Mia would ever have to make.

“Fine.” Mia responded to Kate rather abruptly, while her mind continued to race.

If anything, it was a genius idea. Gaining weight would be quick and easy. It would be simple enough to pack on the necessary weight before winter break, then she’d best Kate again in their challenges and lose it all before she returned for the spring semester. Kate looked huge at her inflated weight, but that was because all of the weight she’d gained was unsightly fat. Mia wouldn’t be so stupid in her calculations. She’d make sure all the weight she gained was muscle. Then her tummy would remain small, and her body would remain tight. Nobody would even be able to tell the difference, and even if they could, she’d start wearing her winter clothes a little early to hide it.

Heck, there would be other benefits to doing this too. Judging by the amount Kate’s breasts had grown over the first half of this semester, Mia would likely experience an overdue growths spurt in the bust department too. Trent’s commitment to her would never falter, but at least she could rid herself of all doubts she had about him. This would be great! She could prove Kate wrong and shut the pest up forever.

“Excuse me?” Kate mumbled unable to imagine that Mia had accepted her all-or-nothing challenge so brazenly.

“I’m going to make you eat your words. I’ll match your weight, prove Trent loves me for more than just my tight waistline, and then spank you in our rematch.” Mia concluded, as she decided to reveal the price Kate would have to pay for her insubordination, “But if we do this, we are going to raise the stakes of our previous bet.”

“I’m listening.” Kate answered in all seriousness.

“When I win, you have to admit. forever, once and for all, that I am superior to you in every way. You gotta be my personal servant for the rest of the school year! I’m talking laundry duty, chores.. foot massages… anything I say, you gotta do. For free. Oh, and last but not least. After I beat you, I’m going on a diet. And since you’ll be my servant, for every single pound I lose, I’m gonna make you gain two, at least! Understand?!” Mia roared in a mocking tone, as she got in Kate’s face and continued, “You’re gonna be stuck being FAT for beach season! Hahaha!”

“Deal.” Kate stoutly accepted Mia’s terms. Sure, the risk was great, but the reward was certainly worth the risk. Trying to show Mia that she had no fear, Kate burst, “You’re gonna lose, your boyfriend, your hot body, and all the perks that come with having them!”

“Haha, when pigs fly!” Mia laughed, as she raised an eyebrow to Kate’s threat, “You’re SO gonna regret this, hahaha!”

“Maybe. Maybe not.” Kate hummed, “You think you are so clever. But if I win, you gotta be MY personal servant for the rest of the year. You’re gonna have to eat every scrap of food I put in front of YOU, without question, until summer vacation. Maybe I won’t be as thin as I wanna be for beach season, but I’m gonna look positively skinny compared to you! You can diet all you want over the summer. I’m going to make you so fat before then that it won’t matter.”

“Tough talk coming from such a soft girl,” Mia teased, as she paused and thought for a moment. This bet was actually genius! Kate would be stuck at her current inflated weigh until she could match her, and then when Mia won, she’d make sure her former rival was fattened completely out of social relevance while she dieted back to pure perfection. It would be the prefect revenge for the foolish war Kate had started. And, so what if she had to put on a little weight? Mia knew she was an athlete. She’d lose the weight in no time once she’d won. It would be gone before spring semester even started. At the very least, purposefully putting on weight and then losing it would be a good experience to remind her of why she should always stay thin later in life. Making up her mind, Mia continued her thought with a certain scathing disposition, “You’re never going to win, so you can talk as tough as you like. Unlike you, your words have no weight to them.”

“Then it’s a bet.” Kate responded biting her tongue. She didn’t have a good comeback for Mia’s witty jibe anyway.

“It’s a bet.” Mia nodded sadistically, as she glared into Kate’s eyes and raised her eyebrow combatively, “Do you know what that means?”

“What?” Kate muttered almost taken aback by the creepy look Mia was giving her.

“I can’t match your weight if I don’t know exactly how much you weigh. So, let’s weigh you piggy!” Mia beamed in her best baby voice, while she shook Kate’s fat stomach all around.

“Get off!” Kate grunted loudly, as she grabbed Mia’s wrists and tossed her hands off in irritation. She wasn’t exactly feeling eager to learn how much weight her body had accumulated since her plan to fatten Mia up had so completely backfired, but she had Mia on the hook of a bet that could be her downfall. She couldn’t refuse Mia’s request, even if she wanted to. Clearing her throat and settling down, Kate sighed, “Let’s go…”
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Comments

BS Writer 4 years
I loved this story and hopes it continues. I feel like the end really set up volume two to be an amazing story where Mia finally gets her comeuppance and the humiliation she deserves.
Lucid Ego 4 years
Commenting on this site is really annoying^^
Thank you so far!
Lucid Ego 4 years
Hearing that you have planned 5 Volumes for this story got me excited though i can understand that you want the recognition for the work you put into
Lucid Ego 4 years
Made this ACC to tell you that i enjoyed this story very much so far. The characters seem refreshing to me and i like the pace of it. My favorite parts have been the encounter between Kate and Jay and the twisted game between Kate and Mia. Hearing that y
Valerio 4 years
I reccomand this story to all, for the plot,events that are not trivial, the costant uploading and your greet writing, I really like kate and when she looks embarassed I hope you continue with the story. (Sorry for my english)
Valerio 4 years
This is my favorite stories on the website, I really like because have a "slow gain" and the characters feel alive, and thats something that didn't see to much infact many story have characters that are only for the fetish but don't have a personality.
Sexypeggy 4 years
Hello . I really love your story that I literally devour.
iam surprised that you had planned 5 chapter.
it's a good surprise for me. Me like too, kate.
because she want the revenge the mia .
is nice body .
My like part or Mia burp .
imag
ClearSkyNZ 4 years
But honestly I think your one of the best writers when it comes to writing in this genre of this fetish. It's hard to find stories where you care about the characters and their motivations as well as having the fetish present. Keep up the great work!
ClearSkyNZ 4 years
I love the detail you add to the story, but I think the reason some people don't make it to the end is because of how detailed you develop these characters and the lack of sexual scenes with their weight gain
ClearSkyNZ 4 years
I think the way you set up these characters and their goals was done really well. I loved the intimate moments Kate would have with Jay. It was a nice change of pace from the pure hate she would feel for Mia
Tttfeeder 4 years
Lost some weight over the summer and gets her revenge in their senior year! At the end of the day it’s your story though, keep up the great work!
Tttfeeder 4 years
My favourite story of yours yet I checked for new chapters daily. My idea for the rest of it is to have Mia gain the weight but somehow win the bet and lose the weight. It would be interesting if she humiliated Kate for the rest of the year, but then Kate
Polarisdreamer 4 years
AlexandrKerensky thank you that's very kind! the plot of Volume 2 is already basically set in stone, so feel free to let me know your thoughts! You're english is great!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@BlissfullyAware thank you! That's very useful feedback! Thanks for the support!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
gfgadgfhd, Chubbybelly1029, thank you

Davidewol You are probably right. Thanks!
Polarisdreamer 4 years
@non-suspcious I don't mind the comment spam, but if you feel it would be easier, feel free to message, I really appreciate your feedback!
Vladimir B 4 years
...want to disturb the organic environment that has developed in your story. Sorry for my English)
Vladimir B 4 years
I liked the story, thank you very much, almost every day I read with binge. Quite a long time (and maybe never) I have not met so elaborate, large and interesting stories. I would express my opinion about events and characters, but I do not want to dist
Non-suspicious 4 years
... is very memorable to me. (i keep overestimating the character limit on these comments lol... prolly should've just messaged u but oh well)

do u mind the comment spam or should i message u the rest lol
Non-suspicious 4 years
very hard for me to pick a favorite character-- part of why i love ur writing is that u take the time to give even the side characters distinct personalities.

same for the second point-- u write everything very well. the overall plot and writing style
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