She didn't notice a thing

chapter 3

Vivian started to eat and eat and eat devouring everything from her big fat breakfast. A giant stake of chocolate pancakes and French toast cover in butter, syrup, peanut butter, powder sugar, and caramel. Big pieces of bacon, sausage, ham, and hash browns. Huge cheesy omelets stuffed to the brim. Big fat breakfast sandwiches, and burritos, 10 of each. No one has ever made it past the breakfast part because of how much food there was, in till today.

The button on her really tight jean short came flying off from her growing belly. Her shirt could not cover her belly at all anymore, Viv down the pancakes like nothing and quickly went on to the French toast. She was done with in no time, she slow down a little but was still going strong. On to the omelets and the big pieces of meat, she made quick work of them and then stopped.

The tight jean short ripped do to her expanding body, " Feel better now?" I said while rubbing her tummy. She nods to answer my question, then she says "Feed me I'm so hungry." she is giving into my power over her, quicker then I thought but could not have happened at a better time.

"Ok sure I'll feed you." I said with the biggest smile ever. "I do like to treat you Viv." she was on the last part of breakfast 20 handheld breakfast foods, I grab one after the another one put it in Vivian's mouth. Not long after I stuffed her she had done it part one was done the first person to do it but she going all the way to the end.

They begin make part two lunch, this give her time to rest for the next part. Viv fall asleep quickly, I rubbed her tummy while waiting. She is going to be do big and fat by the end of this day for sure, and it doesn't help that I make her body gain weight instantly with my powers.

"Wake up Vivian my piggy time for part two." i whispered in her ear. She wakes up looks at the food and licks her lips, "I think your ready, if you need my help just ask ok ." she nods and digs in.

Lunch part was a little bigger the breakfast part with club sandwiches the size of a big dog, along with foot long hot dogs cover in condiment, and lot of big pizza cover with toppings. The size and the number of each was way to much for normal people but Vivian was special.

One after another in her mouth down into belly, "Your half way there you can do Viv," I said for encouragement. "No I need help please feed me the rest please I need more I'm starving," she said winded. She look tired, I stuffed her she looked so happy she rubbed her big belly in complete bliss and pleasure.

"You did it but we got one more to go you think you can finish the biggest meal of the day," I said while cleaning her. "No matter how big it is I'll finish it for you." Viv said half asleep. Her clothes were ready to burst after this she be naked and so much more fatter. I was rubbing her belly while she slept again waiting for her big dinner.

Vivian's dinner was big, so much pasta spaghetti and meat balls the size of soft balls, chicken Alfredo, garlic bread, big fat burgers about 35 of them, meat leaf the of a cow,
a whole ham and chicken, rice, and soup. There was a lot of food and I mean a lot.

"Hey my sleepy piggy I know your hungry for more." she darts up to see so much food her mouth water at the site of it. She come close to me and kisses me and says "I love you Aaron." with she went in sucking it all up like a vacuum. Viv clothes bursted right off her leaving her naked, she did not notice her self naked she was to entranced by the food. She stop half way again,"feed me please I'm so hungry," she with lust in her voice. "I won't you have to do this by your self, and if you finish on your own I feed you dessert how does that sound Viv." I get close and kiss her, "Ok I like the sound of you feeding me dessert." she blushed and eat with a new found drive.

Devouring everything one after another all gone in till she was down to one more fat burger, she was huge and tired. "come on baby you can do it one last burger then dessert." she nods and grabs it slowly, she put it in her mouth and she did it she was the first person to beat the challenge. "Now dessert for the piggy." she smiles and fall asleep again, she earn it. I order a giant dessert for her it take some time to make so I wait.

She wakes up looking hungry and ask, "Were is my dessert I want my dessert you promised to feed me." she said in a sad tone. "It's coming be patient Viv, I will feed you and you won't have to move a inch." it arrived shortly after, it was colossal cheesecake cover in other sugary sweets. Viv face lite up as she got ready for her feeding. Spoonful after spoonful went in her mouth, I feed her the whole thing in minutes.

Vivian past out again but this for a while. Since Viv beat the challenge she won 50,000 plus the dessert challenge 55,000 dollars. I cover her huge naked body and we made it to her apartment.

She was half asleep but a got to weigh her she now 285lbs she was fat and she doesn't know that she is that fat, she think she is still 165lbs but that was not the case. I lay her in her bed and left the money and a note on her night stand and went home for the night.
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Theswordsman 5 years
I wonder if roxy will follow in her footsteps.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 it is a real relationship between them it not complete mind control but that sound like a good idea. We she becomes immobile it would surprise her but she will like it. Not a dark story.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 also he has power over her body making her gain a little easier. But for the feedee she want to eat she like it and she wanted to gain weight after see some new weight on her.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 as for the characters the feeder has the power over her mind but does control like a puppet all he does is make her not notice the weight she has gained.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 I wanted the the story to be unrealistic so would be easier to write for a first so is no health problem happen.Oh and spelling mistake sorry about that.
Chrysophase2003 5 years
The latter is preferable, as too many stories end once immobility has been reached when it's a state many readers want to hear more of. That's normally because an immobile character can't do much. So, you need others to do things to/for them.
Chrysophase2003 5 years
-immobility are the result regardless which induces it. The kicker will be that he gets to blame her for starting it all. From there, you can end the story, or keep it going via Stockholm Syndrome and the feeder's twisted intent to start a family. (TBC)
Chrysophase2003 5 years
-size. That way he can enjoy her begging and trying to fight as he force feeds her daily, until either her spirit breaks, her health takes a sudden turn, or she finds she's too big to get off the bed, and later too big to move her arms. Domination and imm
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Or will her feeder remove her conditioning because he's not just controlling but a sadist, and wants to enjoy her reaction? Maybe he'll do it when she's too big to get away, but isn't yet immobile. The house is just a soundproofed prison for someone her s
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Will all the mounting inconsistencies aid her in breaking free to see reality? Will she come close to seeing reality but be so horrified that she retreats back into the lie and let the onslaught of pleasures melt her brain? (TBC)
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Last, there's the concept that makes this story so unique: hypnosis. How will it stand up to the radical change in her lifestyle? Immobility, medical devices, feeding pumps, etc? (TBC)
Chrysophase2003 5 years
I'm personally a fan of health realism. The toll carrying the extra weight takes on both body and mind, as well as medical intervention to keep the feedee comfortable and alive. PM me if you want details on real (and extreme) medical intervention.
Chrysophase2003 5 years
You've established that her feeder is manipulative, that's why she was hypnotized in the first place, so it's expected that he'll work to cut her off from the outside world before it becomes clear to others she's being fattened up. 3/
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Aside from the spelling errors, I think now that page 6 has been presented the reader will expect her to be taken to live at his place, which has been prepared for her care, comfort, and impending immobility. 2/
Chrysophase2003 5 years
It's a riveting story with excellent pacing. Most stories that change POVs present the same seen over multiple times. Instead, you know what points the reader wants to read. I think the story needs to be proofread before you post it; many spelling errors
Theswordsman 5 years
You could make it to where she bursts out of her clothing during her feast
Monokuma 5 years
This is me first story I've written on here I would like feedback on this chapter so I write the next one and if this story ends up well I continue writing stories