She didn't notice a thing

chapter 4

POV: Vivian
I wake up naked alone in my bed, Aaron was nowhere to be seen. My glasses were on the night stand and saw a note for me it read, " great job yesterday beating the food challenge I was impressed, I left the money on your night stand. sorry for leaving you alone but I see you at work."

I quickly grab my phone to check the time it was 6:22 , still early. Food challenge what happen yesterday, I look at the check it was 55,000 dollars what did do. I went to the bathroom to look at myself in the mirror. I was a little full but it look good, I weighed my self 170lbs" wow five pounds in two days man Aaron treated my to good from the looks of it." I should get ready for work but something to eat first I'm starving.

I go to my kitchen and find nothing to eat it all gone, I should go to the store after work then. "Then I'll eat at the donut shop close to work, so I better hurry." I told myself as quickly got ready and left my apartment.

I text my friend Roxy to go with me before we went to work. She protested at first then I told her about Aaron and she wanted all the details on him. So we meet up at the donut shop, Roxy was a bigger girl at 225lbs. She had a pot belly, small breast, and a ass to make all girl jealous, even me.

"Hey Viv so who is this guy you brought up." Roxy said while hugging me. "Oh...his name is Aaron , he work at our building, nice, funny, sweat, and knows how to treat a girl." I said daydreaming of him. "Sound like you like him a lot...and what this about he knows how to treat a girl?" she said curiously," Oh...umm he got to eat more then I normally do and I gained five pounds." I said nervously. "Really show me I don't believe you can eat more than me." did she just challenge me to a eating contest?
She order something with out me even give her a answer.

Roxy comes back with two boxes of donuts and four big donut breakfast sandwiches. "What all this for?" I ask knowing what is for. " It's for our contest to see who can eat more then the other." she with confident. "The loser pay for breakfast and lunch for the next month." It looks like I don't have a choose and it sound pretty fair to me. "Ok your on get ready to lose."

"24 donuts and two big breakfast sandwiches made with donuts, is what we are working with. Think you can do it, you can back out now if you can't." Roxy was trying to get in my head but it did not work. "Ok let's start all ready." I was getting impatience.

I started with one sandwich and made quick work of it and move on to 12 donuts. They were gone before I knew it, next sandwich was gone as well. It was so good, I downed the last 12 donut and look up to see Roxy. "You win I can't finish." she said defeated and afford the last sandwich and 15 donuts to me. "Do you want the rest?"
"Yeah I'll take it can't let it go to wast." I eat her food while she asked me question. "So you really like this guy are you going to try to find him at work to day?"
"Yeah...that was the plan...want to...help me?

"Yes, I'll get to see your new man." she said with excitement in her voice. "Don't forget your pay for my breakfast and lunch for the next month starting today, now let go to work before we're late."

We make it to our work and part ways, Roxy was the assistant to our boss and I was the receptionist on the same floor as Roxy. There was not a lot to do so I found myself bored but then all of a sudden I got hungry so I past the time by snacking. Mindless eating and eating then I remember that I was to look for Aaron, so I went to get Roxy at her desk.

I made my way to her desk next to the boss's office. "Hey what's up you never come over here." she says while snacking on something. "I want to see if you were free so we can go look for him."
"Oh yes that's right, prefect time the boss is out right now so we have in till he gets back."
"Ok so where do we start, got any info that can help us on finding him."
"Well he said he like to keep to him self."
"Ok that give us a idea on what he does here like mail man, tech guy,maintenance, janitor, or security."
"lot of places to check we should hurry."

We look all over and nothing, back and forth with us snacking on the way to each place. First the mail room nothing, then the server room again no one, next the maintenance room same as before, and the final two places had no one as well filling defeated we went back to Roxy desk so she wouldn't get in trouble with her boss.

"We looked for a hour and 30 minutes and nothing." I said with a pouty face. "Way not call him you got he number don't you."
"Oh yeah I do have his number I almost forgot silly me haha." I Laugh feel like a idiot. "We could have not walk around aimlessly, you got to be kidding me." Roxy said a little mad at me. "This guy got you so flustered it crazy."
I get my phone out and call him and when I do I hear a phone ring behind me. I look to see and it was Aaron, Roxy start to say something but I didn't hear it. "Roxy you know him."
"Of corse I do he my boss you never said he last name so I thought it was someone else."
"Hey Vivian, so your friends with Roxy huh."
"Hi...um yes I am her friend, so your out boss." I'm dating the boss I said to myself.
"Yep sorry I did tell you about it."
"Oh...its ok I never asked you so it fine."
"I got work to do right now but come on by after your done with your shift."
"Ok it's my break right so can I take Roxy she is paying for my lunch."
"Yeah that's fine with me talk to you more later."

I could not believe it, he was the boss where I worked at. "Your dating our boss you go girl." Roxy said hugging me. "I think he didn't say anything about because want me to know him before tell me.
"Yeah probably right his last girl friend was a gold digger so it would make since."
"Since your paying you take me to where ever you want."
"Ok then I choose big city burger it just opened I want to check it out."

We left still talk about Aaron, I was getting really hungry again. We got there at a pretty good time because not a lot of people were there so went in sat down and Roxy order. I was zoning out thinking about what he wanted to talk to me about, not know Roxy order so much food.

"Oh... What did you order Roxy."
"I order us four of everything what do you think."
"is this another one of your food challenges."
"Yes I want to get out of pay for you. So if I win the last deal is off but if you beat me again I'll pay for two month how does that sound."
"it sound like we are going to get fat."
"are you scared or just full from the last challenge and all that snacking you did at work."
"to be honest I'm starving so get ready to lose again."

The food arrives after sometime has passed, there was a lot and it all look good I just went in eat burger after burger. Drinking milk shake after milk shake, fry after fry all gone I ate more then I thought I could. I was lost in the act of eating and by the time I came to I won again.

"Wow...Viv...you really can eat, it's...amazing...and I thought I was that fat friend."Roxy said out of breath and rubbing her belly. "I...don't know what...came over me...I was so hungry." I look down at my belly it was big and round."We should go back Aaron want to talk to you right before you leave."She said while paying for the food. "Yeah lets go back before your late Roxy."

I walked in Aaron office he looked so handsome in his suit, I was zoning out again then he shuck me to get my attention. "Hey Viv can you hear me?"Aaron in a soothing tone. "Umm... Sorry I was zoning out what did you say."
"I said I'm free on Friday, would you like to do something together?"
"Oh yeah sure that be great would did you have in mind for Friday."
"I thought I could cook for you a nice dinner."
"Ok I was going to the store today for grocery do you need me to get you anything for Friday."
"Yes I made a list and Roxy can go with you for help."
"Ok sound like a date then see you Friday then."

POV:Aaron
"So how much did she weigh after today Roxy."
"She weigh 310lbs sir after today stuffing."
"Good keep stuffing for the next two months and I will do the same every weekend."Viv does not notice she 200lbs more then she think she is. My piggy is going to get so fat.
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Theswordsman 5 years
I wonder if roxy will follow in her footsteps.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 it is a real relationship between them it not complete mind control but that sound like a good idea. We she becomes immobile it would surprise her but she will like it. Not a dark story.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 also he has power over her body making her gain a little easier. But for the feedee she want to eat she like it and she wanted to gain weight after see some new weight on her.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 as for the characters the feeder has the power over her mind but does control like a puppet all he does is make her not notice the weight she has gained.
Monokuma 5 years
Chrysophase2003 I wanted the the story to be unrealistic so would be easier to write for a first so is no health problem happen.Oh and spelling mistake sorry about that.
Chrysophase2003 5 years
The latter is preferable, as too many stories end once immobility has been reached when it's a state many readers want to hear more of. That's normally because an immobile character can't do much. So, you need others to do things to/for them.
Chrysophase2003 5 years
-immobility are the result regardless which induces it. The kicker will be that he gets to blame her for starting it all. From there, you can end the story, or keep it going via Stockholm Syndrome and the feeder's twisted intent to start a family. (TBC)
Chrysophase2003 5 years
-size. That way he can enjoy her begging and trying to fight as he force feeds her daily, until either her spirit breaks, her health takes a sudden turn, or she finds she's too big to get off the bed, and later too big to move her arms. Domination and imm
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Or will her feeder remove her conditioning because he's not just controlling but a sadist, and wants to enjoy her reaction? Maybe he'll do it when she's too big to get away, but isn't yet immobile. The house is just a soundproofed prison for someone her s
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Will all the mounting inconsistencies aid her in breaking free to see reality? Will she come close to seeing reality but be so horrified that she retreats back into the lie and let the onslaught of pleasures melt her brain? (TBC)
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Last, there's the concept that makes this story so unique: hypnosis. How will it stand up to the radical change in her lifestyle? Immobility, medical devices, feeding pumps, etc? (TBC)
Chrysophase2003 5 years
I'm personally a fan of health realism. The toll carrying the extra weight takes on both body and mind, as well as medical intervention to keep the feedee comfortable and alive. PM me if you want details on real (and extreme) medical intervention.
Chrysophase2003 5 years
You've established that her feeder is manipulative, that's why she was hypnotized in the first place, so it's expected that he'll work to cut her off from the outside world before it becomes clear to others she's being fattened up. 3/
Chrysophase2003 5 years
Aside from the spelling errors, I think now that page 6 has been presented the reader will expect her to be taken to live at his place, which has been prepared for her care, comfort, and impending immobility. 2/
Chrysophase2003 5 years
It's a riveting story with excellent pacing. Most stories that change POVs present the same seen over multiple times. Instead, you know what points the reader wants to read. I think the story needs to be proofread before you post it; many spelling errors
Theswordsman 5 years
You could make it to where she bursts out of her clothing during her feast
Monokuma 5 years
This is me first story I've written on here I would like feedback on this chapter so I write the next one and if this story ends up well I continue writing stories