The ride of a lifetime

Chapter 5 - on the fast track

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“Um… thanks for that,” Danielle mumbled, raising her coffee as if to explain, coming up to Logan a few minutes later as they both waited at the platform’s edge. “That was really nice of you. No one has ever done anything like that for me before.”

Logan shrugged, a little embarrassed. “Don’t worry about it,” he smiled, his stomach filling with butterflies that this lady was actually talking to him. Standing next to her, he suddenly realised how much taller this girl was than he had thought; only about 5 inches shorter than himself; probably about 5’6. He marvelled looking down at her, even more impressed with how chubby the girl had grown in the short time that he had known her.

“I’m Danielle by the way,” she smiled, holding out her hand to shake. “You’re from America?” she stated, noticing the accent and deciding to use it as a talking point, as most people tended to do it seemed. “Which part are you from?”

Logan happily explained himself, feeling his surprising nerves start to disappear as the conversation flowed easily. “How come you’re here at this station?” he asked at last. “I’m sure I’ve seen you get on a few stops down the line? Woking or something?” he questioned, pretending not to know.

“Yes…” Danielle answered, pushing her hand through her delicious, long, brown hair. “My husband and I…” she nodded, not wanting to go into the divorce, “…I had to get a place of my own. It’s only added an extra twenty minutes or so to the commute into London, so I can’t complain.”

“Well, welcome to your new station,” Logan smiled, lifting his coffee cup and tapping Danielle’s as if declaring a toast, making the sexy woman chuckle.

Logan wondered whether Danielle’s increasing weight had anything to do with the reason why she was getting divorced. Even back in her thicker jacket, it was clear that the weight was still continuing to pour onto her, bloating up her tummy and puffing up her butt and thighs. He saw it up close as the two new friends sat down together, chatting on the carriage; Danielle unbuttoning the concealing coat as the heat of the carriage became too much for her now overweight body. He'd learned so much about Danielle that day, but had deliberately steered clear of anything to do with her relationship.

So, she’s in the middle of a very acrimonious divorce, Logan sighed dejectedly, as he sat there, listening to the beautiful girl speaking to him. He chuckled, realising that, even now, Danielle was still off-limits. How many months would it be until she was even ready to date again? And, once more, the clock was ticking down on his time here in the UK. He laughed, thinking about how disappointed he felt; realising that he had started to fantasise about marrying Danielle and watching her slowly blubber up more and more over the years. He smiled playfully as he grumbled within his own head; why was nothing that straight-forward?
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Comments

LoopsnBloops 7 months
This is one of my favorite stories on the site. It stops at a good place but I really want an epilogue that offers an even sexier finish to things.
Karenjenk 3 years
I just read this again.
a romantic read.
i love how subtle it all is
Feeder862 4 years
Thank you. It's been a while since I wrote this and it still upsets me that no one noticed all my train pun chapter headings. They took so long to think up as well!
Jellyroll 4 years
I loved this!!!
Aquarius64 4 years
I love inventing life stories about people I don’t know when I’m on a long journey!
Lpark435 4 years
By far my favorite of your stories, excellent plot, characters, everything. Hope the guy let all his guards down and stays, would just flatten the story completely, or he asks her to go with him, either one would work.
Feeder862 4 years
Final chapter will be posted tomorrow. Will he stay, or will he go?!
Jazzman 4 years
So Good!:Maybe your best ever!
Theswordsman 4 years
Love it
Td0057 4 years
As always, great story. I like the twist of Logan being encouraged. Looking forward to more.
Feeder862 4 years
Thanks for all of your interest in this story. It will have seventeen chapters once it is completed.
Fatchance 4 years
Love how this story is developing!
Fatchance 4 years
This story is habit forming. Nicely done ... please continue!
Jazzman 4 years
So so Good I have a little tension though just like Collette and Eric. The guy needs to grow a set and tell her how he really feels. It's not a criticism. Both stories are among my favorites.
Akwolfgrl13 4 years
I hope thires more to come!
Daleanator 4 years
Great story! Can't wait for more.
Perenolde 4 years
Great start! Look forward to reading more!
Iread247 4 years
Each story has been everything. I have really been enjoying them.
Jazzman 4 years
Exceptional. Reminds me of Swordfish my all time favorite author. High praise indeed!