Moving on, bloating out.

chapter 5 - anticipation analysis

I'd met Natalie at the weekend on Saturday, a couple of days later on Tuesday morning I got a text at work.

'Hey Dan it was great seeing you. I'm going to be out in town with a couple of girly friends this Saturday night, it would be great if you could join us - Nat x'

What the heck did that mean? So many mixed messages in there, it seriously confused me.
At least she wants me to come out, so that's good, right?

I pondered my reply and what her message meant for the rest of the day at work, just drifting through my to do list on autopilot.

When I finally got home I'd decided on a reply, keep it calm but positive.

'Hi Nat, Saturday sounds great, let me know where, when and I'll see you guys there'

2 mins later my phone buzzed with a reply

'It's going to be so much fun! Tanya and Daniela are going to be there too but they said they might have to leave early, so it could end up just being you and me, is that ok?'

Is that ok? Of course it is! Looks like I was worrying over nothing. Maybe I had over analysed her message a tad.
I replied.

'Yeh that's great x'

Arghhh did I just put a kiss on the end of the message. Don't freak out man it will be fine.

I threw a steak into the pan and prepped some spinach to go with it.

I remembered Tanya and Daniela from when I'd first dated Natalie. They were nice enough. Tanya was a tallish blonde girl who was overly keen on high heels. Daniela was short, a prolific drinker of vodka red bull and seemed to have the metabolism of a humming bird. Both were pretty chirpy and bubbly. Oh I should also mention that they were both slim, well Daniela was slim, Tanya was downright skinny.

Natalie had always been the fat friend of the threesome even when she was just chubby.

Remembering of how Natalie was the fat friend set me thinking about her weight gain again. Bah who am I kidding, I hadn't stopped thinking about it.
When we broke up she was at an all time high of around 17 stone (she would never actually say).
From the way that dress clung to her body she had clearly gained a lot. Maybe around 2 stone, maybe more. I was dying to know!
Everything about her was so bloated and fat. If the way she tackled the meal at the restaurant was anything to go by, then her eating habits had gotten pleasingly out of control.

Well hopefully the two friends wouldn't stay for too long, which would mean I'd get to have a drink or two with Natalie.
If there was one thing that girl loved as much as food it was drink. The sweeter and more alcoholic the better.

Drinking = drunk, which in Natalie's case also = hungry.
Saturday was shaping up to be a very interesting night indeed.

My phone buzzed again

'We will be at revolution from 9, see you there'

Saturday couldn't get here soon enough!
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Comments

Profcat 6 years
Really good pls continue
RFBurton 6 years
You have to finish this! It is insanely good!!
Fatrnfatr 7 years
A very fine story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Jazzman 7 years
Great Story. Kind of wishing He would Grow a Pair! And wishing she would stop lying to everyone Especially herself. I sound impatient But you really write well!,☺
Jazzman 7 years
Have him turn right around and go back to her like a real FA man instead of insecure wimp who is unable to sooth her hurt. Since you asked.
Love the story!
Northern Dude 7 years
I really appreciate all the comments and I'm glad everyone seems to be enjoying the story.
I've drafted out the next couple of chapters but I'm wondering if anyone has any particular thoughts on where things might go? (Don't worry I still have plenty of
Jazzman 7 years
Goodworks you just take your phone and multiply by 14.
I like Stone even as an American because many of the classic authors like Swordfish use it too.
Great Story!
Goodworks 7 years
Great story, I mean it, but why oh why would you use stone? Take some pity on the rest of the world and at least put it in pounds in parenthesis.
ChrisBsmurfin 7 years
Very enjoyable story & well written... looking forward to the nxt part. I like the style it is written in from an F.A./feeders point of view, I also really like the way you keep an air of mystery about Natalie's belly and the fact that she is in denial or
Northern Dude 7 years
Just realised that the end of that chapter 6 has been cut off. I'll sort it out in the next one.

Thanks for all the positive comments guys!
The Donut King 7 years
Great story! Looking forward to the next chapter! smiley
Rustydog7 7 years
Nice story, please keep writing more, I can't wait.
Jazzman 7 years
This is Terrific. I think you wanted to say "hopefully the friends wouldn't stay too long ".
Please keep writing. The premise is realistic and exciting
Leuco 7 years
We need more thx
Northern Dude 7 years
Thanks for the positive comments guys, it really is appreciated.
QuebecFA 7 years
I really love the story and the writing is excellent! I hope you'll continue the story! :-)
RFBurton 7 years
Excellent! Every F.A.-Feeders fantasy coming to life. Now let's see where you take it from here. Great work.
FatAdvocateFA 7 years
Well, jee wizz, good stuff. Distinct voice, brought about by some lucid phrasing of social commentary which made me laugh, sprinkles of subetextual evidence in favor of character traits (good because outright telling is boring), precisely stated
FatAdvocateFA 7 years
description and character reactions to those things described, uniting narrator and reader. Good work. You're in a way obliged to keep going, now smiley
Jktab 7 years
great start more please
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