Nancy and dean

Chapter 6

It was almost comical to watch as he pulled a large yellow dress over her arms, one at a time, pushing her on her sides, tugging it down around her, bit by bit, until was down to past her knees, albeit slightly mussed. He wiped his brow, he pulled the largest socks he could buy onto her feet, before putting on a pair of sneakers, he wasn't sure she could walk on anything else at the moment.

He left, and had to wait quiet a while until she came to on her own, as no sound he made woke her up. She blinked her eyes, using her arms to sit up in the bed, to find Dean on the TV.

"Well Nancy, I've matched your interior to your exterior, as far as you're concerned. It's been a while, your husband is due home in a few days, if he still wants you. There's no traces of my apatite enhancer in you, not that you don't have a healthy apatite on your own now, I've made sure of that." Dean said, the pride in his voice easily noticeable.

And then, the TV screen darkened for a moment, showing Nancy when she was first brought to the room. Tears filled her eyes again, at the sight of her former self, in shape, toned tummy, tight ass, everything just like she had made sure it stayed, lest she become the child she had hated.

And then, the screen darkened again, showing the Nancy of today. If she was holding back the tears before, they streamed now. Her limp her was hanging around what could only be described as a fat face.

Her cheeks were extremely rounded out, not quiet jowls, merging into her triple chin. Even the large dress was tight on her, her breasts pushing the fabric of the yellow dress out a couple of feet, hanging

down and pushing into her enormous belly, which stretched the dress to it's limits. Her legs looked like tree stumps, and as she sobbed she could feel her ass quake. The screen darkened, for the final time,

she heard Dean's voice, "Well Nancy, this is goodbye. That is, if you can make out it the door," and the smaller of the two doors opened, showing a hall way, "which might be hard to do at 628 pounds. There's some money at the end of the hall, and a door that leads out back into the world, but it might be a little different, looking like you do now. Goodbye."

Sniffling as she waddled, Nancy made her way to the door, turning sideways, squeezing what parts of her fattened body she could, through the door bit by bit...
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Champ 6 years
great story!
Karenjenk 7 years
being sub by nature.... I loved this. totally.
Laser 14 years
Um........no.........failed!
Mtlfan 14 years
For those of you looking for more, i'll have something new up later tonight, several hours from now.
Mtlfan 14 years
Like I said, I don't know if I'll continue this or write something else in the same style, it really depends on my mood.

As for the unhappy comment: It's a fantasy. I like control and humiliation, and guessing from the view count, so do quiet a few others. I could go on for hours on the how/why of it, but I doubt this is the place for that.

And for those of you liked it, in comments or in private message, thank you. Comments are always useful.

And yes, I have RP'd occasionally, again something that depends on my mood, i'll probably post an MSN or AIM name in my profile.
BS Writer 14 years
That would be great. I really want to see more of this.
Mtlfan 14 years
I don't know if I'll write more on this, the first thing I'd do is correct some of the formatting later. I thought of it as a start to end thing, though I could go on with how life is "after", instead of writing something else.
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14 years
is there more coming?
BS Writer 14 years
This might be the best story I've read on this site, though I can't help but want a chapter with people reacting to her.
Fatlilboy 14 years
I LOVE revenge stories. It was hot!
Maximum 14 years
interesting?